Thursday 5 February 2009

SARA EL KORCHI : As It Comes To An End

As It Comes To An End

As I sit here in class,
I observe my friends
And look forward to the year
Coming to an end.

It's gonna be sad
To say good- bye.
I'll miss everyone.
I know I will cry.

I remember the day
When I came back
To be with my friends
And get on the right track.

We had so many moments;
Some bad, most great.
I'll always remember the love
And erase the hate.

I don't wanna say good- bye
To all my friends.
I don't want this year
To come to an end.

SARA EL KORCHI

11 comments:

  1. Well Sara
    Everything must come to an end.
    Even the sweetest things.
    But don't worry.
    You will still have something to live by.
    The memories of your class mates.

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  2. hi sara
    nice poem félicitation^^!
    one thing is sure , you'll never fall into oblivion...^^
    and like monsieur da hassan said "don't wory sara"

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  3. hi sara
    nice poem félicitation^^!
    one thing is sure , you'll never fall into oblivion...^^
    and like monsieur da hassan said "don't wory sara"

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  4. It's nice Sara
    Really it will be so hard to leave , but , that's how life goes.
    So, don't mess up those little sweet times you live now with your friends, after,they'll become so sweet memories.

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  5. Good Sara.
    It's so hard to leave the friends with whom we have spent the best moments, This is life. But the essential thing is that we will ever remember the sweet memmories, and we will still be friends forever.

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  6. Then we must forget the past and start a new life.Anyway, there is lot of friend they don't deserve to shed a single tear for leaving them. In The future we can meet most better friends...

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  8. hi everyone and thanks for all those comments.when i read you msg dear mari i didn't think so.therfull i didn't answer.but now i see how much friends can hurt us, and belive me i think that i'm regreting writing this poem and the "20october".i wanna tell you that i hope i had i gun to put it in them head mmmmm no i can't.anyway life is like this

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  9. hello Sara
    Really it's very good and it's sensitive .I agree with you it will be very hard to leave but if we love us we can't separate

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  10. hello Sara
    Really it's very good and it's sensitive .I agree with you it will be very hard to leave but if we love us we can't separate

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  11. well sara.it's a very beatiful poeme.maybe after the end of this year i will not be with u physicly,but be sure that my soule will be always with..okey sis?!! and try to listen to this song evry day' true friends until the end of the earth' ...with my best wishes i adore dear sister

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